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This is my first drawing of a head in profile where I didn't use a model or photograph or anything like that for guidance. I scanned it from my pencil drawing in my trusty blank-sheet drawing notebook. It's the head of a man, mustache-d and bearded, with curly hair.
I personally thing the largest problems are with the nostril (it's to dark, and large), and the muscle lines I put in the neck and face. Also the tip of the nose is too messy - I just couldn't find an eraser Tongue . Of course I'm still very amateur, so I didn't expect more.
Anyway, if you could point anything out, I'd be grateful:
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I'm no artist, but I think his head needs to be wider...
You agree with Z!re, then.

I need a frickin' eraser.....
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People are all about proportions. The eyes are about halfway down the face, the base of the nose is about halfway between the eyebrows and chin, and the edge of an expressionless mouth lines up with each pupil. It's a good start though, just keep on practicing.
I think its very good. The proportions are all wrong, but then again, look at most popular cartoons in the newspaper. Usually the proportions are all wrong, but that doesnt stop the picture being good art.
Quote:I think its very good.
This is where my harsh but true opinion must come in.

It sucks. Don't post this kind of crap anymore. Thank you.
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Obviously, I'm special and I like you drawing. :wink:
Quote:This is where my harsh but true opinion must come in.

It sucks. Don't post this kind of crap anymore. Thank you.

Here's where my harsh but true opinion must come in.

He's learning. Nobody else minds. Grow up. Thank you.
Quote:He's learning. Nobody else minds. Grow up. Thank you.
He should learn on somebody else's bandwidth. I don't care if nobody else minds, it's my opinion. I know many grown ups who tear people down.

Now if you'll excuse me, I have to pick up my dry cleaning. Troll costumes are surprisingly delicate.
Quote:This is where my harsh but true opinion must come in.

It sucks. Don't post this kind of crap anymore. Thank you.

Hmm. was that directed at me or Zack?

And if he should "learn on someone else's bandwidth" then why the hell did you click on this thread. You FREAK. Not that you didnt already know that...
Dont worry I dont have anything personal against you yet. (not that you probably care)
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