09-22-2004, 01:48 AM
I made a few illustrations for some story I made on another forum... Here's a few of the images. These are here for critique.
![[Image: scavengertable.gif]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/RockumanZ/scavengertable.gif)
![[Image: speckill.gif]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/RockumanZ/speckill.gif)
![[Image: clipboard.gif]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/RockumanZ/clipboard.gif)
09-22-2004, 02:36 AM
using ms paint's crummy line tool! very nice!
the paint line tool is particularly annoying because it has a crosshair cursor, blocking certain pixels from view at times.
the thumb should be slightly on top of the card in the last picture, if it's holding on.
when scalping someone, the arm typically doesn't swing all the way back (do the motion yourself). UYou'll see that it stops slightly to the front of you (although is fully extended). Just fix the perspective.
Also, the angle of the hand with the knife should be changed, you couldn't get enough power through your wrist holding it that way. the you should get a side view of the fist, from where the the thumb is pointing away from you
and the dead guy, the right hand is really weird looking. the left hand is ok.
the paint line tool is particularly annoying because it has a crosshair cursor, blocking certain pixels from view at times.
the thumb should be slightly on top of the card in the last picture, if it's holding on.
when scalping someone, the arm typically doesn't swing all the way back (do the motion yourself). UYou'll see that it stops slightly to the front of you (although is fully extended). Just fix the perspective.
Also, the angle of the hand with the knife should be changed, you couldn't get enough power through your wrist holding it that way. the you should get a side view of the fist, from where the the thumb is pointing away from you
and the dead guy, the right hand is really weird looking. the left hand is ok.
09-22-2004, 03:28 AM
Good stuff - especially for MSPaint. The first one is the best. The face in the second one is awesome, but the body proportions are a little off.
09-22-2004, 04:59 AM
That is teh crazy!! W00T!
Uh, but seriously, it's a little violent.... :S.... his head got severed. In half. not at the neck. IN HALF. But anyways, it's better than what I can do!
Uh, but seriously, it's a little violent.... :S.... his head got severed. In half. not at the neck. IN HALF. But anyways, it's better than what I can do!
09-22-2004, 08:08 PM
I like the third one. Very nice for Ms.Paint =). Why dont you anti-alias it? It will look better =).