Qbasicnews.com

http://users.sisna.com/joeking4/The%20Fields.mp3


Um...it's a little rough in some spots, and I forget the lyrics near the end, nevertheless, looking for some feedback.


Thanks

um its ok but it gets boring. there not a reall bridge and the same strum pattern gets really annoying. mabye work on a bridge. and put some more rythem and feeling into it.

its a good start. but as said, you seem to lack a sense of rythym in some spots, and it doesn't really accumulate to much. here, use this as a reference, its one i did a while back in my "Acoustic-is-the-only-guitar-for-me" phase. i redid the song on electric, and added some drums and a bass, and it was amazing. so good things do come from small things.

http://www.geocities.com/jamesk_1031/F.zip

its not that bad! Its a very good start

I've never been a fan of guitars, but it sounds good. Although it gets some boring in the middle, and a little less at the end Good work.

That's actually not bad! Good work man. How long you been playing the guitar for?

It's missing something though....drums! You need drums?

and since where on the same topic, can you check mine out too?

http://www.geocities.com/mooch168/acoustics.wav

Those were seperate pieces from a song I made. Comments would be nice I'm just a begginer, so don't be too harsh

Quote:and since where on the same topic, can you check mine out too?

http://www.geocities.com/mooch168/acoustics.wav

Those were seperate pieces from a song I made. Comments would be nice I'm just a begginer, so don't be too harsh

That's a nice song. I like it.
I'm a beginner too. I started playing near the beginning of the year, so it hasn't been that long.
Yeah, drums would be cool. I think I can do that. What I would have to do is create a beat in modplug and play to that. Then I can insert it in and and drums and other things. Besides that, I think it lacks a chorus too, and could greatly benifit from one. That's what I've been working on lately.

Quote:Yeah, drums would be cool. I think I can do that. What I would have to do is create a beat in modplug and play to that. Then I can insert it in and and drums and other things.

When DarkDread showed me his demo of "In Winter's Heart", it was basically a modplug drum track with his guitar track and vocals. The idea works pretty well.

Thanks for the nice comment Radical Racoon

Is it possible to add sound files together(they play at the same time) using Sound Recorder?