[first song] Guilt

[seph]

As you can see, it is not done. Also, I just recorded it on my dig. cam... I am downloadin something that may be able to convert it to audio for ya'll. Anywho, here it is: (go to bottom for more talkin)

Also you can download it here. http://forum.blissdev.com/guilt.zip

Code:

VERSE1 (not done)

  Em          D            Am            Em
I once knew a man who once said he could fly

    Em           D         C            A
He said he could give me a peice of the sky

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CHORUS

  D           C         G             A
I told him no you can't deny what you are

       D           Am         C            Em
You're life passes by and you haven't gone far

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VERSE1

  Em          D         Am           Em
I once knew a woman who had a strong name

    Em          D             C                A
She didn't understand what it was to place the blame

    Em               D         Am          Em
She told me that she wanted to live like a bird

        Em           D          C            A       Em
And she couldn't see why we all followed the herd



       Em            D        Am        Em
Well I told her, hey lady, it isn't all great

      Em         D           C          A
Yeah, some of us just cannot carry that weight

          Em                D             Am            Em
Past that day, the precious woman, no she never was the same

    Em            D              C            A      Em
She left half the woman that she was when she came

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CHORUS

  D             C         G             A
I told her yeah you can't deny what you are

       D           Am         C            Em
You're life passes by and you haven't gone far

Yeah, this was one of my spur of the moment bursts of creativity. Since I only been playin the guitar recently, I don't know a lot about this stuff, but I feel it's a good first try? I got stuck on the chorus and decided that for now it's good being short. The second part may sound a little weird but if you do it right it sounds pretty cool I think.