01-02-2005, 03:57 AM
hehe, thanks for those catches radical racoon. like i said, it's just a start, and not revised either.
I meant to say something along the lines of useless there
This seemed to be an unfinished thought. i assume i meant to say: "The man stuttered in his walk and turned his head to the side.."
Quote:I get confused on this sentence. Effortless tries to dry his face? Did he succeed in drying his face? Or do you mean "useless" tries? Wasn't their a paper towel dispenser somewhere, since he used a paper towel to wipe his shirt?
I meant to say something along the lines of useless there
Quote:I'm confused here too. Studdered isn't a word, is it? I guess you meant 'stuttered', but that dosen't make much since, unless you meant 'stumbled'?
This seemed to be an unfinished thought. i assume i meant to say: "The man stuttered in his walk and turned his head to the side.."
Quote:Besides that, it's a good startThanks
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