01-02-2005, 04:14 AM
Quote:Yep, definately looks good so far, as was already pointed out there are a few rough spots-- But like you said, it's not revised, so that's fine.
Interesting indeed, post more when you finish it! :wink:
awesome, i'll be sure to have the first chapter finished by the 4th. thanks for you compliments, and your story josiah (the one that was on TBN) is a very awesome story ineed :wink:
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