02-04-2005, 08:07 AM
I didn't really get that into it either... but it was mostly because it seems to parallel an awful lot with Brian Jacques' unique Redwall characters, and the way that you narrate it is a little strange... "I have <such and such> I know this because <such and such>..." You could have said "<this> evidence led me to do <this>" or something of that nature.
All I can really tell you is to keep trying... but maybe pick some other characters...
All I can really tell you is to keep trying... but maybe pick some other characters...
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One night I had a dream where I was breaking balls. The next morning, BALLSBREAKER was born.
BALLSBREAKER 2
~-_-Status Report-_-~
Engine: 94%
Graphics: 95%
Sound: 100%
A Severe Error has crippled BB2 for the time being... I have to figure it out, but until then you won't see much of it
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One night I had a dream where I was breaking balls. The next morning, BALLSBREAKER was born.
Quote: Excellent. Now you can have things without paying for them.
BALLSBREAKER 2
~-_-Status Report-_-~
Engine: 94%
Graphics: 95%
Sound: 100%
A Severe Error has crippled BB2 for the time being... I have to figure it out, but until then you won't see much of it
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