[secondsong] Rabbithole

[seph]

Check it out please? Just first verse and chorus (twice) is all it is right now. Want feedback on it please? Not lyrics so much as the overall sound...

http://forum.blissdev.com/rabbithole.zip

Some people say that MP3 file doesn't work right in winamp on first try. If you try it a couple times and it still won't work, try

http://forum.blissdev.com/rabbithole2.mp3

it's lesser sound quality but smaller file.

[Bluffer]

sounded good to me I liked it
Was that your kid in the back ground?
8)

[seph]

The baby? Yep.

[speedlemon]

for a work in progress... thats great. besides you can play the guitar. thats cool. im sure a lot of other people can too, but its cool how you make your own songs... again, a lot of people do this too. but only a few people have enough courage to share them with the world. :wink: