What do you think. Logo-Ish Game picture thingy

[red_Marvin]

The logo looks good, but IMO the text needs a little work.

First off if the title is "Dead War" and "The Dead Lord" is a subtitle,
like fx. Neverwinternights: Hordes Of The Underdark
Then the subtitle should be smaller and/or darker etc, because, when I
first read it I read it like a sentence; "Dead war the dead lord"
which to me sounds grammatiacally strange.

Is it a pirate game? Maybe blend in a island view/map or something to
add a little more color and contrast...

[TheDarkJay]

Think of it as Forest re-Made, with a completely different battle system.

The story is pretty simple, well, i think it's best to describe it through a little Narration

"10 years ago 'They' came, Blood thirsty and Destructive. My home town was among the first to be hit, wiped out, along with my family.
I'd like to say i tried to defend my family, fought my way out of the massacre, but i can't, i didn't, I just hid while my life came crashing down around me.
When 'They' had moved on i fled from my Home Town and eventually joined a reisitance group fighting for survival.
Who are 'They', you ask? They are the Living Damned, The Enders of Times. 'They' are the living Dead, and this is their war, a dead war, for only the dead will see the end of it."

[TheDarkJay]

TheRealMethuselah on http://s14.invisionfree.com/sweetstuff/ did an AMAZING remake of the Title Screen for me