12-07-2005, 06:44 PM
The logo looks good, but IMO the text needs a little work.
First off if the title is "Dead War" and "The Dead Lord" is a subtitle,
like fx. Neverwinternights: Hordes Of The Underdark
Then the subtitle should be smaller and/or darker etc, because, when I
first read it I read it like a sentence; "Dead war the dead lord"
which to me sounds grammatiacally strange.
Is it a pirate game? Maybe blend in a island view/map or something to
add a little more color and contrast...
First off if the title is "Dead War" and "The Dead Lord" is a subtitle,
like fx. Neverwinternights: Hordes Of The Underdark
Then the subtitle should be smaller and/or darker etc, because, when I
first read it I read it like a sentence; "Dead war the dead lord"
which to me sounds grammatiacally strange.
Is it a pirate game? Maybe blend in a island view/map or something to
add a little more color and contrast...
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