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Delusions Of A Turtle
#1
Here is a shape poem of mine i Found awhile ago that i did for school (a year or two ago).

--------------------------------------------- A British Bulldog,
-------------------------------------Crazy crocodile and petrifying Panther
-----------------------------------I’ll Take them all on, Turn them into Jelly
-----Crush There Belly, they’ve got guts, but their nuts, Now I’m mad
------With my Turtle-----Tough Shell, I’ll Ring Their Bell, I’m quick
--------Like a cheetah, ---------And Tough like a Lion,
------------------------------------------And cannot be beat
------------------------------By Jason---------------------Morley

For Those OF You who aren't bothered about the shape

A British Bulldog,
Crazy crocodile and petrifying Panther
I’ll Take them all on, Turn them into Jelly
Crush There Belly, they’ve got guts, but their nuts, Now I’m mad
With my Turtle Tough Shell, I’ll Ring Their Bell, I’m quick
Like a cheetah, And Tough like a Lion,
And cannot be beat
By Jason Morley[/code]
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#2
you could have done code quotes to avoid having to use the dashes...(not particularly fond of poems after having to analyze the suckers in english class, so no comment there.)
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Quote:you could have done code quotes to avoid having to use the dashes...(not particularly fond of poems after having to analyze the suckers in english class, so no comment there.)

That would mess up parts of it in smaller screen resolutions though....
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